Interview with Jessica Hayworth: Writing to Please Your Own Intentions

Today's guest for the SAT (Successful Author Talk) is Jessica Hayworth, author of MARTY MATTERS and MARTY MAYHEM, both available from Little Creek Books.

Are you a Planner or Pantster?

Oh goodness!  Could I say both? I begin my novels with what I think is a good plan but quickly realize my mind has other plans! I usually do write in a rush, though, as I am so OCD…when I begin something, I cannot wait until it is finished! The words haunt me until they are on paper! 

How long does it typically take you to write a novel, start to finish?

Honestly, I can sit down and write a novel in about three weeks. Now, that does not mean that it is perfect at that point, by any means. After that, there are revisions upon revisions. 

Do you work on one project at a time, or are you a multi tasker?

I am definitely a one project at a time kind of gal. With that being said, ideas for other novels show themselves as I am writing. I simply write them down and promise to get to them later.  Some of them are still waiting on me…

Did you have to overcome any fears that first time you sat down to write?

Yes!  I still do. The very first time I wrote a novel, I was scared to show it to anyone! I was so afraid of failure. I quickly realized that I am not writing to please anyone. I am writing to appease the thoughts and intentions inside myself. Those intentions are always to tell the stories of those youngsters who can’t do it themselves. I just have to remember that I am writing for the right reasons, and the rest, well, I can’t worry about the rest.

Have you ever quit on an ms, and how did you know it was time?

No, I have never quit on an MS. I feel strongly that the idea was posed to me for a reason...maybe it was the story of a child in my classroom or one I saw on the news. It can, many times, be the combination of several observations from society. I work diligently to complete it the best I can. 

How long have you been querying? 

For my new project, I am currently querying. At this point, I have been querying for almost two months. I can’t say that my query is perfect, but it has undergone massive surgery…four times. I have learned that querying is no different than laying your heart on the line. Moreover, I have learned that rejections are not personal; the agent is just not the right match for the particular project. I know that as I learn more about the querying process, I will be led to the right agent. 

Any advice to aspiring writers out there on conquering query hell?

Research. Research. Research. As I am querying, I first do my research. In following many of the agents on Twitter, I have learned that their emails get bogged down by queries for genres they don’t even represent. They also have wish lists for a reason. Take time to research the agents, what they represent, and what specific projects they are begging to take on. 

How did it feel the first time you saw your book for sale?

Amazing! It’s wonderful to walk into a store and see the book on a shelf! As a reading teacher, I have watched my students read book after book. To see my own book in their hands is something I never thought would happen! 

How much input do you have on cover art?

Lots! The illustrator for both MARTY MATTERS and MARTY MAYHEM was wonderful to work with. She read my book and asked me what I envisioned. She worked super hard in order to get every detail correct. She would complete the cover and ask for any necessary revisions. She made me feel comfortable in doing so.She was so patient with me.  In the end, my vision became her vision. It was perfect!

What's something you learned from the process that surprised you?

Ha! The amount of editing!!! As a reading and English teacher of several years, I didn’t expect so many points of correction! Although the editing process takes several days, in the end, it makes the novel so much better!

How much of your own marketing do you? 

As my writing deals mostly with issues teens face, I attempt to hit them head on. I do as many school visits as time allows. I love to directly place the books into the hands of students. I also speak at reading councils and work with school systems that purchase the novels as instructional materials. I personally think it is important to do much of my own marketing. I want my readers to see that I am proud of my publications!

I also have a website and am on Twitter.

When do you build your platform? After an agent? Or should you be working before?

Personally, I think platform should be built as soon as possible. An author should know his/her audience and the situations they face in order to appeal to them. For me, being a teacher allows me an understanding of my readers and the issues they face daily. I don’t guess what they go through each day; I see it. 

Do you think social media helps build your readership?

Absolutely! As an author, it is so important to reach out to potential readers. I feel it is important to give them a glimpse into your world. They can understand more about you and in turn, more about your writing. I know that I respect a book much more if I am able to identify with the author! Social media is great for building relationships! 

Interview with Frankie Brown

I'm lucky (or cunning) enough to have lured yet another successful writer over to my blog for an SAT - Successful Author Talk. SAT authors have conquered the query, slain the synopsis and attained the pinnacle of published. How'd they do it? Let's ask 'em! Today's guest for the SAT (Successful Author Talk) is Frankie Brown, author of UNTIL WE END, available now from Bloomsbury Spark.

Frankie writes, sells and hoards books in Athens, GA, a funky little town famous for its music scene. But, as anyone who’s ever heard the fruits of Frankie’s musical endeavors can attest, her talents lie elsewhere. She’s turned her creative energy to crafting stories and can typically be found hunched over a keyboard in her neighborhood coffee shops.

Are you a Planner or Pantster?

A little bit of both. I can’t write a scene without knowing exactly how it’ll end, but making lengthy outlines puts me to sleep. I usually have a few big scenes in mind to use as benchmarks and that’s as much planning as I do.

How long does it typically take you to write a novel, start to finish?

Well, UNTIL WE END was my first book! It took me a little less than a year to finish, edits included. Now that I know more about my process, I’m hoping it’ll be quicker. Six months is my goal.

Do you work on one project at a time, or are you a multi tasker?

I always get great ideas for new projects when I’m writing. Typically what I’ll do is bang out the first chapter of my Shiny New Idea while it’s still fresh in my head; that way I won’t lose the voice or concept of it. Then I’ll continue the project I was working on before, this time with incentive that once I finish, Shiny New Idea will be waiting for me...

Did you have to overcome any fears that first time you sat down to write?

Every time. My day usually goes: Stare at blank screen -> panic -> browse Twitter -> stare at blank screen -> browse Tumblr -> panic -> turn internet off -> write.

I wish I was kidding! Writing anxiety is a very real problem for me, so my writing process sometimes resembles a slow-burn panic attack. But when I have a plan (when I know exactly what I’m doing with a certain scene), nothing’s better than writing. Preparation beats anxiety every time.

Have you ever quit on an ms, and how did you know it was time?

I almost quit on UNTIL WE END! Before I even finished the book, people were telling me that it wouldn’t sell because dystopian was over -- and these were people who hadn’t even read it. But I did finish, and I tightened it, and I wrote what I hoped was a strong query letter (which you helped with, Mindy!) and here I am.

Who is your agent and how did you get that "Yes!" out of them? 

My agent is JL Stermer of N.S. Bienstock. I cold-queried her the “traditional” way.

I was actually in the somewhat bewildering and stressful position of having to choose between agents and manuscripts. A few agents were looking at my WIP for various complicated reasons, and I was talking to a few about UNTIL WE END, but I was so impressed with JL and her assistant Sammy that I had to say yes to them.

How long did you query before landing your agent?

I began querying in May and signed with JL in August.

Any advice to aspiring writers out there on conquering query hell?

Make your book as good as it can possibly be, and then make it better. Write a query that represents it (and your writing!) well. Don’t press send on anything less than perfect -- but at the same time, don’t get so caught up in editing that you never actually send a query. (Get on Twitter if you’re not already, and follow the agents you’re querying.) And don’t beat yourself up over rejection.

How did it feel the first time you saw your book for sale?

Exciting! And SCARY! But mostly exciting. Everything with my book happened very, very quickly, so it still hadn’t sunk in that I was a Published Author.

How much input do you have on cover art?

A lot. My editor, Meredith, is incredible. She included me in every step of the way, sending me very early drafts of cover proofs, asking what I thought about all of them, and making sure I was involved in the decision-making process. I couldn’t be happier with UNTIL WE END’s cover.

What's something you learned from the process that surprised you?

The supportive online community of YA writers and bloggers. I can’t imagine writing in a vacuum or going through this process by myself. The writer-friends I’ve made have helped keep me sane.

How much of your own marketing do you? 

I do a lot of my own marketing, as most writers do. I blog and Twitter handle is @frankiebrown25. Follow me those places and you’ll know what I’ve got going on.

When do you build your platform? After an agent? Or should you be working before?

I started Tweeting around the same time I started querying (May of last year), and I started blogging shortly before that. But I don’t like to think of my presence on social media as part of a planned platform. My Twitter and my blog are just places where I go to talk, like a water cooler.

Do you think social media helps build your readership?

Absolutely!

A Self-Pub Success Story With Jennifer Prescott

I'm lucky (or cunning) enough to have lured yet another successful writer over to my blog for an SAT - Successful Author Talk. SAT authors have conquered the query, slain the synopsis and attained the pinnacle of published. How'd they do it? Let's ask 'em! Today's guest for the SAT (Successful Author Talk) is Jennifer Prescott, author of THE HUNDRED: FALL OF THE WENTS. Jennifer has written everything from satire to humorous YA to literary short stories, but is assiduously attempting not to jump genres in an effort to finish her middle-grade trilogy.

Are you a Planner or Pantster?

I am an unadulterated Pantser, although I think we need a fresh term. How about Reckless Fool? For me, the story grows up organically, root by shoot, and every fresh growth surprises me (much as I hope the reader will be surprised). That said, with The Hundred I wrote the climactic chapter, which takes place at the cliff’s edge by the sea, very early on in the process. And a big plot twist is revealed here. I couldn’t fathom at first how I was going to find my way from point A to point B, with 20 chapters to go in between.

Once, as an experiment, I wrote a query for a novel before I’d written the novel. So I’m not immune to a bit of planning. I wish I were better at it. I’d probably avoid more ripping of threads and painful restitching.

How long does it typically take you to write a novel, start to finish?

If I’m working assiduously, I would say a full year. I have a full-time job and three boys so the only time I have to write is in the evenings. The Hundred took me more than five years to complete. I have jottings from at least seven years ago that formed the seed of the novel. 

Do you work on one project at a time, or are you a multi-tasker?

I’m a multi-tasker, although I’m trying to arrest this tendency. At one time I was working simultaneously on a comedic memoir about panic disorder, a madcap YA about a pimply teen’s adventures in space, and a literary mystery about a canoe trip in Maine. I’m a genre-jumper. I’ll probably need about eight pen names. 

Did you have to overcome any fears that first time you sat down to write?

I’ve been writing as long as I can remember; it’s in my blood. So I’m not afraid of writing pure crap any more, because I’ve churned out pages of it. I used to be afraid. The things I feared most were: 1) Not writing due to Writer’s Block and dying a lonely death because of it 2) Forgetting something. But the subconscious never forgets. It weaves in the most insignificant sensory moment from 15 years ago, seamlessly, into today’s sentence. Especially if you once took the time to once write it down. 

Writing is like falling into a dream where you are home again. It’s not writing that’s scary—when you avoid the laptop and wander around tidying the house. 

How many trunked books do you have?

None. I refused to trunk this book. But I have numerous trunked short stories and other wretched bits of prose languishing in my attic. I even have some ghastly poems.

Have you ever quit on an ms, and how did you know it was time?

I quit on a screenplay a few years back. Yes, I write those too! I’ve completed two, with a few others dormant. Screenplays are NOT GOOD for Pantsers. You really, really need an outline for a screenplay. They are hideously tough structurally. I knew it was time to bag it after the file was labeled something like “Screenplayv45aNEW_NewVersion_THISTIMEFORREAL.doc.”

Do you have an agent?

Nope. I am a lone wolf. I stopped waiting for affirmation from someone and gave myself my own Yes. It’s been a challenge, but kids and adults who I don’t know are reading my book. I get reports from across the country about a child devouring the story of Tully, Copernicus, and Aarvord after lights out, and I feel a surge of happiness. Maybe one day it will take off like wildfire. Maybe not. But it’s out there. There are some regrets. I have seen the effort that agents and publishers put forth for their authors. For example, to be considered for an Indie Kirkus Review you must pay at least $425. Really? I don’t have $425 to spare and it seems smarmy. But I also don’t have the Kirkus seal of approval.

How long were you querying?  

I’ll answer this another way—how many times did I query before deciding to go Indie? According to Querytracker, I sent 81 queries for this book. 26 of those requested manuscripts. The rest of them said “No, thank you” or never responded. Of the 26, 22 declined (whilst comparing me to writers like Phillip Pullman, telling me I was at the forefront of something “new,” and saying how innovative and magical I was but…Not Right For List!) Believe it or not, four agents still have the manuscript. They held onto it for two years or more. I nudged. I got bored. It seemed rude, after a while. During the time I spent querying, I could have written another book. I realize I had pretty good stats. “The One” could have been just around the corner. 

But, I think when you do something that’s out of the norm it takes a unique person to take a risk. The Hundred doesn’t fit neatly into any category. There are no dragons and no elves. No vampires. No unicorns.  I invented just about every creature in the story, excluding a little snake and two human children. It’s its own blend of fantasy, sci fi, magic, and time travel—and I think genre blending and bending worries some people who want an easy label. It doesn’t seem to worry kids, though. I wrote this book for them, not for the agents. 

Any advice to aspiring writers out there on conquering query hell?

Querytracker.net is an immensely helpful (and free) resource and also a rather nice community. I made some good pals there! I’ve heard similar praise for Agent Query Connect. 

One tip is to try a completely different query if the one you have is not resonating. I don’t mean just clean it up—try something entirely different. I revised mine from scratch and got about ten immediate requests for The Hundred. I knew, then, that this particular query was a winner. Overall, querying is debilitating and humiliating, with occasional stabs of hope. I will say that none of those wonderfully hopeful moments matched the way I felt when a seventh-grade teacher let me know that two of his students finished the book in one night (500+ pages?!) and begged for the sequel. Or when another teacher, in an underserved school in the Bronx, passed print copies to three of her students and one said, “When I started reading this I almost had a heart attack, it was so good.” That’s gold. I did something right. 

How did it feel the first time you saw your book for sale?

I handed the book to my 10-year-old son, who had read it prior to publication, and said, “I did it.” It was a rough proof copy that I was about to savagely dog-ear and proofread, and it felt heavy and proper. I had granted my book a spine, a book that was a haphazard stack of printed pages. I know that’s not “for sale” but that’s when it was real to me. If I one day see it in an actual bookstore I think I’ll get a nice jolt of electricity. 

How much input do you have on cover art?

Complete input from start to finish. I had two talented design professionals create my cover, but I was able to give them a lot of guidance and feedback. I even researched and found all the bees that are used on the cover—public domain and free of charge! That said, the result is something I never pictured when I was just imagining it in my mind. The designers were able to take a beginning concept to the next level and surprise me.

What's something you learned from the process that surprised you?

I should have known, but I learned very quickly that independent booksellers want nothing to do with Amazon-created products. I used CreateSpace, which makes things incredibly easy and affordable for writers, but it is pure poison for the indie bookstore. They Hate Amazon. Don’t kid yourself that your local bookstore will want to host an author reading with you with tea and cakes and that they will stock their shelves with acres of your new book. No, they will not, unless the owner is your sister. I have heard that Lightning Source may be a less offensive service. Don’t know ‘em, haven’t dealt with ‘em. 

How much of your own marketing do you?  

All of it, although I do have some very energetic friends who make it their business to pass out bookmarks at the gym and call the local libraries to insist they carry my book. These people are amazing. I myself have a blog, Facebook, Twitter, and am on Goodreads.

I also have a blog for my other “personas.” It’s a little more edgy. Note from Mindy: Also, frickin' hilarious. The Feral Pony makes me feel dull and boring next to her wit.

When do you build your platform? After an agent? Or should you be working before?

I’m really torn about “platform,” especially for a fiction writer. Guy Kawasaki, author of APE: Author, Publisher, Entrepreneur suggests that an indie author should dedicate months to building a solid presence before publication. It’s not very different for traditionally-published authors. I’ve heard numerous times from my traditionally-pubbed friends that they have to do a great deal of their own marketing. That said, the whole business of “platform” is somewhat abhorrent. Did Emily Dickinson have a platform? If I am literally constructing something on which the trust of my readers is to be based, would I rather stand atop a slew of inane tweets or a stack of great stories? Unless your platform-building is incredibly useful and clever, stop exhausting yourself. Just write good stories. Here's a recent post on this topic.

Do you think social media helps build your readership?

Yes, despite what I said above!