Richard Osman Talks Promotion When Crossing Over From Television to Publishing

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Mindy:   So your new book, The Thursday Murder Club is a murder mystery that features elderly protagonists, and it's really interesting and a fun take. So can you tell us a little bit about where this idea came from and how you decided to flush it out? 

Richard: Yeah, absolutely. It came from, real life. I've been a writer for my whole life. I've never written a novel. And I kept thinking, I must do one, I must do one and a couple of years ago I went to a retirement community in England. A really, really peaceful place in the middle of nowhere. But, you know, lovely sort of surrounded by kind of ancient Woodland. I mean, it's lovely. Rolling green Hills and lakes and all this stuff.

And like any good crime reader,  I took one look around at and thought, This would be a good place for a murder. But you know what I mean? With the bird song and you know, the quiet. Then we went for lunch at this place and it's this community, you have to be 70 to live there, but it's incredibly, it was an incredibly social place. 

And as I started talking to people, and you know, chatting about their life stories, what they'd done before, all this kind of stuff, I thought, wow, if there was a murder here, then I bet you lot could solve it. And a bet one of you would have done it as well. Those were the types of people. And then I was looking at a notice board and they had things like incredible social life at this place. 

And they had like Tuesday French club and Wednesday knitting club. And just the thought Thursday murder club came into my head. And I had just this thought of four people in their seventies. Once a week, they meet up to look over old unsolved police cases, essentially. It's an excuse to sit down, have a couple of bottles of wine, you know, have a gossip, have a chat and look out over old police files. 

And then there's a real murder in their community. And the four of them all in their seventies decide they'll be the ones to investigate and solve it. And the book is essentially, it's about the mystery about what happens, but it's also about how on earth four people in their seventies can get themselves to the heart of a police investigation and can solve this murder. 

And this idea of them being so overlooked and underestimated and people thinking they're so harmless that actually they can sort of get away with whatever they, whatever they want. And that's the, that's the kind of basic premise, as soon as I had those. There's a murder in this beautiful place. We've got these four people they're in a club. I literally that night, started writing. 

Mindy: Yeah, I love it. And actually, as you were explaining it, I thought to myself, well, of course, I mean, that makes perfect sense. It takes so much time and mental effort. Who has all the time to sit around and try to solve old cases, let alone a new one and just like, Whoa, retired people. Yeah, that makes sense.

Richard: Well, what I thought. Once I went, I went there. It's like being on a college campus where everyone's over seventy. So everyone's hanging out and there's lots of gossip and politics, but yeah, no one's got any work to do. No, one's got any assignments to hand in. So they've got a lot of time on their hands, and you know, murder and investigating murder is sort of the, is the perfect thing, but also the skills they bring to it. 

Because, you know, the four members of the club, have very, very different backgrounds. So at the heart of this, it's got these sort of unlikely friendships. One was a nurse, one's a psychiatrist. One was a labor activist. And one, we're never quite sure what she does, Elizabeth, but it's clear that she was very high up in the MI6 and that she was a spy. And is able to bring some of her past life to bear. But they've all got such different skills. 

And as you say that you get to 70 odd and you've got a lot of experience of life and you know, a lot of things. You know an awful lot about human nature as well. And so, it felt to me like as soon as I started writing it, I thought, well, of course, these are the perfect detectives, you know? Time on their hands, experience of life. Everybody overlooks them anyway, and it's such a joy to write them. And so far in the UK, at least it's been a joy for people to read, which has been thrilling.

Mindy: That's wonderful. You know, I remember reading not so long ago, a news article about a program where they were teaching young people, teens who wanted to learn English as a second language, they were having Skype, like weekly Skype conversations with elderly people in nursing homes. Because these people are dying for someone to talk to and for the interaction and these students simply just want to be immersed in the English language.

Richard: There's an epidemic of loneliness amongst the older people. We all kind of know that and I think it's something that's going to be, you know, addressed in the next few years because I think people have worked it out. And when I went to that community, I genuinely thought, well, this is how we should all live. You know, it was so communal and obviously you shut your front door, you don't have to see anyone. But if you want to, you can sort of go out and there's communal facilities and all of this and everyone who reads the book, just says, well, how old do you have to be to live here? Because I want in.  Because you know, it's such a nice place. And it's just a, you know, you've got, there's such a great group of people.

It's incredibly social and everybody is, I'm having to keep secret, the real place where it is because I promised the residents, the real residents there, that I wouldn’t. Because they're all quite, there are no fools over there. They’re lawyers and all sorts of stuff there. So they sort of know, especially over here it’s been such a huge sensation. They know there’ll be tourists. I'm having, I'm having to keep it a closely guarded secret.  

Mindy: Speaking of the communal aspect of the highly social aspect of the-- Do they call them nursing homes in Britain? Or is there another word? 

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Richard: Well, there are such things as nursing homes, but this is a much bigger thing. This is a whole retirement community. So it's entirely independent. It's entirely sort of, I mean, there's a nursing home on site as well for when people are incapacitated. And one of the characters who was previously in The Thursday Murder Club is, essentially in a coma in the nursing home at the same facility. But yeah, so this, this would be a retirement community, I think. 

Mindy: Okay. So I've heard for a long time through friends that work in the nursing community and also just as a kind of a common thing that people either assume or know to be a fact is that there's actually a lot of sexual activity among the elderly in these communal living situations. And I thought that was, I thought that would always be something interesting to kind of visit in a fictional story.

Richard: I don't shy away from it. I mean, in, in the same way that the murders happen off camera in this story. So does that, but Joyce who's on main narrator who used to be the nurse, is a widow, but she has always got her eye out for the next guy. She has a, has a sort of affair in the book that that's, I think is quite interesting, but you know, she clearly has lost none of her libido, none of her romantic libido either. And the two guys in the, in The Thursday Murder Club Ron, the labor activist and Ibrahim, a psychiatrist, they do have a long conversation about their physical capabilities, were they to be in a romantic relationship. 

And they both admit that, listen, it would be harder these days. And it was a, and Ron says, honestly, it's a huge relief. It gives me so much free time now I'm not constantly, and I'm not constantly thinking about it. Yeah, constantly worried about is this actually, there's a real freedom to it.

My starting point for the whole thing was these people are in their seventies, but, I mean, they have  - there's zero difference between them and someone in their fifties or thirties or twenties. The brain is the same. The desires are the same. The appetites are the same, you know, you just, you just are in grief a bit more and pain a bit more. And you know, you, you understand mortality a bit more and there's physical issues, but you know, the fun of it is writing them, like I know they are, which is just as 23 year olds in 75 year old bodies. 

Mindy: Absolutely. And I'm so glad that you address that aspect because as I had said, I'd always heard that there was as much if not more sexual activity going on. And so I'm, I'm really glad to hear it. That sounds great -- Solve murders, have sex. 

Richard: By the way, great name for another podcast. Solve murders, have sex. 

Mindy: That one, that one might catch a little faster.

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Mindy: So you've mentioned a couple of times. I know you've had just fantastic reception in the UK with the book. Can you talk about that a little bit?

Richard: Obviously when it's my first novel and people here know me a bit, cause I do various TV shows, but it's not some, you know, I'm not known as a novelist. This is my first one. And so  we were sort of quite hopeful. We thought it'll, you know, but at least people will hear about it. Which is good. That's something. But yeah, I think in it’s first three weeks we've sold 200,000 copies or something, which is completely unprecedented over here. It's been number one in the independent book charts on Amazon and the Sunday Times. So all of that, which has been, has gone absolutely beyond the wildest dreams. 

I think that, firstly, it's, it's a mystery, you know, and we love that. It's like Agatha Christie type mystery. But secondly, You know, in this very bizarre year, we're having, you know, it's a book -- and honestly it was written before the pandemic or anything like that -- but it's, but it's the book that comes, that has a lot of humor in it that will make you laugh. It's a book that has the one that you cry as well. But, but it sort of has a, has a, has an overall feeling of warmth and friendship and kindness and some terrible stuff is happening. But it comes from my central standpoint to life, which is a standpoint of kindness and friendship. 

And we’re all told these days that everyone's at each other's throats and, you know, the social media tells us we're all competition. Actually in our daily lives. I don't believe that's the case, you know? And I think actually the real world has more companionship and community, than Certain people would like us to believe 

And that's where the book comes from. I think that's why people have really responded to it, you know? And that's why people have read it and recommended it and said, this has made us feel better. And, you know, I think it's, I think it's a combination of things. 

Mindy: I think that's absolutely true. I was actually having a conversation with my agent yesterday about where to go next and what kind of projects we were going to be pitching. And that was something that has come up like repeatedly, speaking with my other author friends, about what's in and what do people want right now? And it just keeps coming up. People want light reads. People want humor. People want to escape where we are. 

Richard: It’s so interesting though, isn't it? Because you know, more than anyone, it's all very well saying what I should do today, but, you know, by the time a book is written and it comes out, it’s two years later.

And so I was right when I was writing, it was all the big sort of psychological, thrillery kind of unreliable narrator type books. And I just sat down and wrote the book that I would have written at any stage, I think. But it's, you know, and people would say, you know, in my other life of TV, you know, every couple of years, you know, you have A Great British Bake Off or a show like that, or Dancing With The Stars and people go, Oh, is there a trend now for, for, for really sort of lovely, kind friendly Telly and you go, yeah that trend is always there. Yeah. You're never going to, if you make a decent show that is about decent human beings being decent to each other, and it's a good show you're always going to do well. That never goes out of fashion. 

Obviously when you're writing, you're thinking oh God, what is this like? What other books is this like and those, all kinds of things. Cause I'm not entirely sure I can work at, you know, this isn't an Ian Rankin book, but you know, he's such a genius that, you know, I, I can't be him. and so you just have to trust the voice don't you? You just have to trust the process. And I think it came out at a good time as well. I think we've been lucky in that regard. 

Mindy: Yeah, absolutely. Fortune favored you. And I think too, you're right. I mean, obviously you can't ever write to a trend if you're going to be working in traditional publishing because you're working 18 months to two years ahead of time. The indie world and the self pub world, they're a little more limber on their feet and they're able to respond more immediately to trends, but yeah, you're totally right. If you're going the trad route, you just have to write the book of your heart. You have to write what's there. 

Richard: You know, there's a lot of girls on the trains after Girl On the Train, but, you know, Girl On the Train, wasn't written to follow a trend, if that makes sense. Sometimes, sometimes you have to set that trend, but yeah, that's self published world is interesting and I'm fascinated with it as well. Because, you know, from my world of telly, which is very, very fast turnaround. Really, you know, if we, if we have an idea, we can be filming it a month later and it can be on air three months later.

And going into the world of publishing, the thing that I've noticed is a very, very, very long, lead time and very long PR and publicity. And so you must be in a world where the people can get stuff out much quicker. 

Mindy: I am traditionally published, but I have friends that work in, that are hybrid or strictly Indie self pub. So they have that mobility. I am still operating in the traditional world. When I talked to my agent about like, what's next? What are we doing next? It's more about in terms of, What is the next like, are we going to shift in my career, more about marketing and branding? Not necessarily about like, what can we respond to this right now? 

Richard: But when you're talking to your friends who are, either hybrid or, or, you know, in, in, entirely in this new world, is there a jealousy at all or not a jealousy, but is there a kind of, some of your mood -  I'd love to be able to move this quickly, this mobile. 

Mindy: Absolutely. There are so many benefits to going that route. I mean, if you're good at marketing, you're good at self promotion and you can understand how, how to optimize like SEO and ads, which are what's tricky. Like me getting the visibility is what hurts. If you can do that and be a good writer. I do think that it is an absolutely valued way to do your business. 

Also, one of the things that actually I find myself the most jealous about, as opposed from a trad to myself, pub friends, is that they have immediate and automatic feedback on what is working and what isn't. 

Richard: Yeah. Yeah. That's fascinating because lots of it is kind of online e based and computer based.And so people are immediately telling them. What they think and what they want for the next one. And that kind of feedback loop just it's very loud because traditional publishers, again, it's different because it, because it feels like, a lot of the, a lot of the clothes that it's wearing are the clothes of the last century. That somebody, one of these sides, if one of these sides really does the proper lessons of the other side, then someone's going to come up with a hybrid that blows everything out of the water with that. 

Mindy: Yeah, I agree. Yeah, no, I agree entirely. And I've been in publishing. I've been publishing since, well, let's see like eight, nine years now. And I can tell you one of the things that frustrates me most is when I'm speaking with someone that is not in the industry, someone that knows nothing about the publishing world or even the entertainment and media world. And they say and my book came out like on Tuesday and on Friday. They're like, so how's the book doing? 

You know, because you've hit like high levels where you're getting that reporting right away. I am, you know, not going to sell 200,000 copies in a week. So I don't have those numbers. I don't have them for about six months. And so when someone says, how's the book selling, I have to literally say, I don't know. That seems very archaic. 

Richard:   And the economics of these self publishers as well, are they taking any upfront money or are they literally, are they literally getting it hosted and then taking a much bigger percentage of each sale than you might do in a traditional publishing group?

Mindy: Yes, absolutely. A much bigger, much bigger chunk of it, the sales and immediate feedback on your ads and the promos that you do, and, you know, what's working There is some upfront cost like you, you typically, you're going to want to buy software to do your internal design. And usually you're going to pay someone to do your cover. If you're smart, you're going to get a copy editor that's going to make sure everything's clean. But I mean, there is upfront like you're, you're probably looking at, if you're going to launch something and really be aggressive, you could put in three to five grand just to get yourself out there and it may or may not pay off.

And that is where, that is where you don't know. And that's why I do enjoy my traditional publishing little, you know, feather lined cradle, where I get an advance. And I get that advance whether the book dies on the vine or not. 

Richard: Yeah. Yeah, yeah, exactly. No, there's an awful lot to be said for it, isn't there? I really, really admire people who do that self-publish thing and they were their own marketers and stuff like that. Because the other thing that strikes me in, in this one, I mean, for you, I'm a TV producer, Really. And so I understand telly and marketing and PR and stuff like that. 

You know, I, I will make sure, I'm really proud of the book. I'm really proud of The Thursday Murder Club. So I feel like it's something I want to sell. So I know what TV shows to go on and how to be on those shows and how to sell them, what the optimum way of using social media and stuff like that is, and I've been amazed by how many authors don't really think that that's their job. 

Mindy: Yep. 

Richard: Which I understand because, because there's obviously. You know, there's the introvert thing and the artist thing, but it feels like that you said it probably has to be one's job. 

Mindy: Yeah. If you want to succeed, you have to, because there are plenty of aspiring authors out there that will be willing to figure it out and to do that heavy lifting. 

Richard: Hmm. I mean, it all comes to the good news is I think anyway, I mean, you tell me if I'm wrong. It feels like it all, you have to have a good product. I mean, there's no, there's no shortcut there. You know, you have to have something that people love to read. But if you've got that, then I feel like it's... 

I mean, I've been doing lots of, in the last few weeks, I've been going to lots of independent bookshops in the UK who've done such an amazing job in the pandemic, you know, and you know, it's such a heart of their community. And the fact that I'm going to all those places, and then I'm doing TV and talking about those places, they're saying, look, this is just great.

Cause that’s bringing people into the stops and then they're buying this book and that book, and the industry is a selling industry. And that's us, and it's the booksellers. And, and it feels like, it feels like people don't quite understand that they're in an industry where there are products and they need to shift some units, for everybody's good.

Mindy: Yeah. Yeah, absolutely. It is very true. And I know a lot of, especially aspiring authors, most of the people that have had a long enough tail in the industry, the reason why they're there is because they figured that out. But when I'm talking to younger writers or new writers or people that are just interested in getting into the industry they're looking at, but how much of my own promotion do I have to do? Well, as much as you possibly can, if you would like to succeed. And that's just, that's just the way it is. We are no longer, writers are no longer living at the top of an ivory tower and casting our pages out to the masses. 

Like it doesn't work anymore. No, one's going to be standing there waiting for you to drop them so they can catch them. Like you gotta go out there and get people's attention. And I understand that that doesn't necessarily fit with everyone's personality, but the truth is that in the new tech world of media, like I have been around people that don't like to use microphones. And I'm like, well, you know, we're speaking to an audience, so you're going to have to talk into the microphone.

Richard: Yeah. There's a lot of tricks in that, but it's interesting, because the one thing you would think that would unite all writers. Is they’re good with narrative. They're good with stories. They’re good with empathy. And to me, selling has always, it's been about that. It's all, it's all it is, is narrative and empathy. 

And you know, so maybe it's the way it's presented to people. I think people don't like the idea that they're showing off or that they're saying, I'm great. And I sort of think that, it isn't that it's, are you proud of your book,  and if you are proud of your book, then, you know, it's the book that you need to talk about. Not you that you need to talk about. But it's some, I, I do get it and you know, it must be very, very hard if you're, you know, if you're… Cause I'm happy sitting for two years, writing a book by myself, but I'm also then happy to keep going out and talking about it. But I think some people are one mode or the other, right? 

Mindy: Yes, absolutely. I agree with you. I am a bit of a unicorn myself in that same manner that I could be alone for three months and I'd be fine. And you can put me in front of 2000 people to speak and it doesn't bother me. Like I, in fact I enjoy it. I love it. I get energy from them and it's a, it's a feedback loop of me loving them and them loving me or hating me either way. I mean, they can hate me. That's still energy. Yeah. So, I mean, whichever way it goes.

But I do know, and I have plenty of friends that are good at one and not the other and good, or  just medium at both. And just an effort if you just put an effort in there, I mean, chances are, you're going to reach someone. Someone is going to see you and something about you or your speech, how you speak, how you present and yourself, it will resonate with someone. And if it resonates with that one, someone it's a, you know, it's a pebble in the pool and those ripples are going to go out.

Richard: Yeah, I think, I think that's exactly right. And it's fascinating cause I do, I know that-- listen, the key thing here is let's talk about writing. Let's talk about our characters and, and all this stuff, but that's, that's the fascinating thing. Having worked in a creative industry, my whole life, the creative bit of this is the same, but the selling bit has been really, really, really, different. And so I find that, and it's lovely. I'm learning so much from my team over here. And a couple of them have said a couple of times, Oh it’s really interesting listening to you talking about the best way to use television or the best way to use social media. Perhaps we can do that next time, but it's, I love it. It's such a lovely industry. Everyone's been so supportive. Other writers, I’m just amazed by how incredibly kind everyone is to each other. Right? 

Mindy: Very much so. And I can tell you, that's not just a British thing. In the publishing industry, we have it's, it is uncommon to be in an industry where everyone is helpful and looking out for everyone else. But the truth is, especially in the publishing industry, we're not fighting for audiences. We're not trying to scoop other people's readers. We always say over here, That a rising tide raises all boats.

So like you're saying you're going into these indie book shops. People are going to come and see you, and then they're going to go browse and they're going to go pick up. I mean, very few people walk into a bookstore and buy one book. They're going to go in and they're going to find someone else. And they might find an author that they never would've come across. They may pick up a book and that author is benefiting from your success. And that continues to be true. 

Richard: Yeah, I don't think, I think publishing, but you know, television is interesting because as a unit, in terms of audiences, it's getting smaller and smaller, I mean, not crazily so. But publishing is not a zero sum game at all. And I've really, really noticed it is some crime fiction doesn't need any help for me over here at such a big genre. But the fact that I'm in this genre, I am, I can bring a slightly different audience into it from my TV stuff. And so I can, you know, I'm sort of doing interviews that you might not otherwise read, but talking about, you know, Ian Rankin and Val McDermid and people like people like this, you kind of see that.

Yeah. I love the, the rising tide raises all boats because it's exactly right. Isn't it?. And, and, you know, that's, it's, I just have been stunned right from the start about how supportive people are, how excited people are about someone else's success, you know, how great they are about, you know, everyone, if someone's in the top 10, everyone's tweeting about it and stuff like that.

And it seems so far. I've been in the industry for a short while, but it seems genuine. I could be wrong, but it seems genuine. 

Mindy: I believe it is. I really do. I've never had anyone knowingly resent my success and I think people, people are pretty open with their feelings. Right? Especially on Twitter. 

I've only got you for a couple more minutes. So why don't you tell the listeners where they can find your book? Now I'm in the US I do have international audiences, but when is the book releasing in the US? 

Richard: In the US it was out on the 22nd of September. So it's freely available now at all your usual online places, but also lots of, indie book shops. And what have you, I don't know, Barnes and Noble, then they do all the kind of, major US places. And hopefully, more and more as we go into Christmas And in terms of the rest of the world, I think was in, I think 30 territories now, I think we're in China and Russia and France and Germany. 

And obviously all that when you're publishing Britain that also covers Canada and Australia and all of that. So yeah, we're in loads and loads of places and it's a really English and British book, but I think that in that. Americans love British books. And Brits love American books, right? Because it's like the same, but different. 

I though,t writing this book and also because people know me in the UK, I thought, well, I can see how this might do well in the UK, but the second that, you know, France, buy it in Germany, buy it and Spain buy it. You're going to think. Okay. You sure? You know, they kind of read the birth and they don't mind that it's in England. They just like the characters and that's been, that's, that's something I hadn't predicted if I do a TV show sometimes they don't travel and with this, I sort of assumed it wouldn't travel, but I forget, but it's the power of story And the power of character. 

Mindy: Right.. It is.  I weirdly have a very large, Portuguese audience. Yeah. I mean of all things. And I'm just like, that's awesome. Very cool. So, you know, and I will, engage as much as I can. Of course I use Google translate and it, I'm sure it comes out like stilted and awkward, but they, they really appreciate that you’re trying. And so it's really cool. 

Richard: Yeah, that's amazing. And, and, and Portuguese audience, of course you can pivot fairly easily into Brazilian audience, which is hundreds of millions, right? 

Mindy: Yep. Exactly. So I'm not complaining. so again, the book is The Thursday Murder Club by Richard Osman. And why don't you let listeners know where they can find you online?

Richard: You can find me on Twitter at, at Richard Osman, and you'll find it’s very, very English, but there's a bit of fun. I talk about British TV, a lot and British and British sweets and candy and chocolate and stuff quite a lot. And on Instagram I am Mr. Osman on Instagram. But Twitter is my, is, is mainly where you'll find me.

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Hayley Chewins Talks Writing Upper Middle Grade And How to Handle A Revise & Resubmit

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Mindy: I'm here with Hayley Chewins, and we're gonna be talking about writing upper middle grade, which can be a really tricky audience age to settle on voice wise. And a little later on, we're also going to be talking about the process of an R and R that's revising and resubmitting, which can be extremely frustrating and high stress. So we're going to cover all those things. But first, Haley, why don't you tell us a little bit about yourself? 

Hayley: My name is Hayley Chewins. I am an author. I write middle grade fantasy books and my books, like you said, they skew upper middle grade. They're a little bit on the older side of middle grade. On um, they skew a little bit darker, too. So they’re fantasy books, but especially my latest book, is kind of borderline fantasy horror, dark fantasy. And I also coach writers, help writers to write more intuitively and to get in touch with their unique voice to come up with their most original ideas ever. And I just also launched a new online writing course called 100 Ideas in 10 Days, which helps you to come up with original ideas that are fascinating and interesting to you as a writer. So I do a couple of different things. Yeah, I'm really excited to be here so thanks for having me. I’m excited to chat everything middle grade and revising. I've done a lot of revising and resubmitting. 

Mindy: It's a frustrating place to be. It's like almost there. So why don't you tell us first a little bit about specifically writing upper middle grade? Because you're right. That is very much an area where you can kind of edge into some darker thematics and even push the envelope a little bit with your content. So why don't you talk about writing for upper middle grade and cross over potential for YA and where you see that age range falling? 

Hayley: So it's really interesting because I didn't set out to do it consciously. But my first book, The Turn Away Girls, when it got published, it was kind of like, You know, they put the age on the back of the book, so it was categorized 10 to 14 which is obviously on the older side. Usually, middle grade is like 9 to 12. I guess it depends on the reader.  I don't ever like to Generalize and say, like all 12 year olds are like this. So all 14 year olds are like this. Yeah, so it depends on the reader. So, like a 10 year old reader who has a more mature, maybe reading level or just more emotional maturity might get Just as much out of it as a 14 year old reader. 

It wasn't a conscious thing I didn't set out to go like I want to write up the middle grade, but I think just the themes that I covered in my books just tend to be a little bit heavier. Like the Turn Away Girls is about an island where music is kind of magical. And boys are allowed to make music, and girls are not. And there's a certain group of girls called the Turn Away girls who are forced to turn music into gold so obviously has, like, feminist themes, But on top of that, it also the main character has anxiety. I didn't intentionally do this, but my books tend to have mental health themes, even though they’re fantasy books. So I think it's because of that that they were kind of categorized on more of the upper end. Um, you know, they're not gory. I don't write about like crushes or first love or anything like that, that's usually, that's more YA. I think it's just kind of the heaviness of the themes, sometimes more so then, like the actual content of the book. 

The other thing is that my writing style does tend towards the more lyrical. It's not necessarily the most accessible language for a 10 year old. For a nine year old, it's actually very mysterious to me because I think as a writer we just create the book. And then, in a way, it's like the publisher's job to kind of categorize and market the book. So I didn't query my books as upper middle grade. I just queried them as middle grade, but it ended up being categorized that way.

Mindy: You’re right at that point, you know, marketing is making some decisions. Publishers and book stores are making those decisions, and sometimes even librarians and parents are making those decisions. I like what you said about not forming a hard line for age ranges yourself. You're not necessarily saying I'm writing for 13 year olds. I was a YA librarian for about 14 years. I can tell you, as I'm sure you're aware, too. There's such a broad range. What one 13 year old can handle, the other one simply can't. And so you're right. You would never, You would never say This book is for 13 to 15 or this book is for 10 to 12 because the exposure levels are different, even vocabulary, but also thematics. It could be very different from one child to the next. And I like what you're saying, too, about how you write lyrically. Lyrical writing can't work for every middle grader. Sometimes they need that cemented, rather than being asked to think about larger concepts. I don't know again like you're saying, I really do believe that it all depends on the middle grader themselves and where they're at. And I know a lot of middle graders do rely on those gatekeepers like teachers, librarians and parents to make sure that they're getting what they need. If they need something a little more stimulating than the upper middle grade can sometimes be a great fit.

Hayley: I do think there's a sweet spot that gets kind of missed because of that, and not to generalize about. Like all 13 year olds like this little 12 year olds are like that, but it is kind of like middle grade. And then there's, like, this younger YA that doesn't always get tapped into. And then, Like a lot of YA is like you just plunge straight into, like, really dark stuff, which, of course, teens need, um but yeah, there is, like, this unexplored kind of middle grade area, and it's interesting that we call it upper middle grade. We don't call it lower YA. I don't know if that's just cause lower YA sounds weird. I don't know, but what about younger YA? I totally agree that, you know, Children, just like adults, are individuals. They can't really be categorized in terms of age. And anyone who's ever interacted with you know, a group of Children knows that not every 14 year old is the same. And, like you said, the emotional maturity, the intellectual stuff, what that child has also gone through in their life because I remember being 12 and sometimes feeling like reading some books just felt too, too young for me because they just didn't resonate with me, even though they were technically written for 12 year olds.

I think the other thing with writing middle grade or writing YA, that can be quite tricky is that when you're writing, you kind of write for yourself and you write for the 12 year old or the 14 year old or a 16 year old that you were. I don't write my books from a didactic point of view. I don't write them from the perspective of being a teacher or a parent. I really write them as a writer and as an artist. And of course, I tapped into how I felt when I was 12 or 10. But yeah, I'm not kind of looking to pass on any kind of message, and I'm not really thinking too hard about, you Know, how the book is going to be marketed or categorized, even though, obviously, if you're querying, you have to know that. You have to know I'm writing a middle grade book or I'm writing a YA book. But I think it's something that Children's writers maybe have to navigate that maybe people who write for adults don't really have to navigate that thing. Like you just write the book. You don't have to say who is it for necessarily. It’s that dance between like the artistry of it, Which is like you're writing a book that you would want to read. But then also, of course, keeping in mind the age of your reader at the same time, and sometimes that's a really difficult line to walk, and I don't have any clear answers on it. To be honest.

Mindy: I was actually signing some stock this weekend, and the bookstore owner asked me, Do you have any plans for writing middle grade? And I said No, because, honestly, I think it's too hard, and I mean that. I don't think I could write it. I don't know that I can walk that balance that you're talking about because I write for teens. I write Dark and I write gritty and I'm not making any choices that are self censoring. I write for teens. I don't have any published books for adults, but I have written books that would be marketed to adults that are as of yet unpublished, and it was the same process for me because my reputation, my brand is that I'm always going to push the envelope. I'm gonna be gritty, and I'm gonna maybe cross some lines so I don't have to worry about that when I'm writing. It is part of what my reputation has been built into. So I don't know that I would ever be able to ask myself those questions. I think I would be so cautious that I couldn't be honest in my writing. So I think it takes a very special skill set to write in middle grade. 

Hayley: Well, I don't know if it's a skill set or if it's more just that you really connect with that age group. I think that people who write middle grade most of the writers I know, right middle grade. They just have this feeling of like, I want to write about how I felt when I was 10 when I was 12. Like they feel very connected to that version of themselves, and they can remember it vividly, and they have a sense of deep respect for how it felt to be 10 11 12. And it is. It's such a different feeling, too. When you're 14 15 16 or 16 17 18 on, But it's really interesting that you said about about middle grade because I kind of feel like that about - Not that I wouldn't be able to push the envelope like not the same problem - but I often feel like I just don't know how I would do it like I don't know how I would write about being a teenager, and I don't know if that's just me, like I'm not as connected to my teen self or if I don't get book ideas that are, like, suited to YA or what it is. But yeah, I think it's really interesting how some people just gravitate more towards the one or the other. And then other people can do everything, and it seems like they could just shape shift. I'm very jealous of those people. 

Mindy: Me too. Me, too. I want to circle back a little bit. You mentioned there's no category such as lower YA. Um, there's not. We do use the term clean YA, sometimes. YA that is a little more sweet, naive, and I don't mean that in a negative way, but sweet and naive where they’re characters or teenagers, But there's no sex that there's no drugs. There's no, you know, usually no language, clean YA. It is something that really kind of started to surface, that distinction has come up like I would say, maybe in the past, like three years or so. YA can be very dark and like maybe 10,15 years ago, that was really celebrated like Look, we're really pushing the envelope here and we can go there for teens now and I think that's wonderful because that's where I live. But then we kinda, and the market in general really leaned that way for a while. And there were a lot of librarians I know and also teens that were like, Hey, where's you know? Where's my sweet romcom? Where's my book that doesn't have someone dying in it. Clean YA has kind of had a resurgence, especially now, during the pandemic. People need an uplifting read. People need to maybe not necessarily read about something depressing when we're all living it. That's my answer for when you ask as far as age range. We do have that distinction of clean YA, which is for any age, but it's more of a content descriptor rather than an age range. 

Hayley: How do you feel about the term clean? Which kind of suggests that the other kind of YA is dirty.

Mindy: I don't mind it so much just because as when I was a librarian, I mean, that was part of what I did, because I did all the cataloging. So while I didn't read every single book, obviously in the collection, I would flip through. My eyes were very trained to pick up cursing. I can scan a lot of pages and pick up, you know, drugs, sex, whatever. Ii did that specifically. Just so I knew. And, you know, I had, like, a mental running What kids are going to want this book? What kids are not ready for this book, things like that. Also, to keep myself in good standing with parents and administrators. I don't necessarily have a problem with the word clean because my books are usually called, and I do like the term - gritty, which doesn't necessarily carry dirty with it. But I think the clean distinction is, um, more of an indicator of we're not going there and you know I respect that. And I certainly don't think that clean YA, that the term is denigrating to like what I write. Also most of the people I know write Gritty the way I do. If somebody wanted to call it Dirty we’d be like, Hey, that's fine. That markets very well. 

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Hayley: I guess I'm more thinking about the teams who might encounter that term because I'm just thinking about the idea that, like certain kinds of behavior, are dirty or wrong? 

Mindy: No, I get it and that's, That's a good consideration. I agree. Like I would never - And I think it's more of something that's of reference for the gatekeepers. Like I would never hand a book to a kid and say, You'll like this. It's clean. You know, I would never hand a book and be like, you’ll like this. It's dirty, you know? It's like I would never make that distinction to them. It would just be something that I was privately holding. 

Hayley: I think that's why librarians are so important, especially youth librarians, because, you need to get to know the kids who are coming to your library and then on. You have conversations with them and figure out what books they're going to suit them. Such a specialized and important job.

Mindy: It is, and it's something an algorithm can't do. So there's a shout out from my librarians. 

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Mindy: So let's move on to talk about revising and resubmitting for listeners who don't know that's called an R and R. If you get an R and R, what that means is that an agent has read your query they requested pages, usually requested the full, read it and said, Oh, you're so close, but not quite. It isn't necessarily rejection. What it is is an agent telling you these are the weaknesses. I'd like to see you strengthen them and come back around. I want to read it again. So A and R and R can feel a little deflating, but at the same time, it should be encouraging. It's another step in the ladder, so why don't you talk a little bit about that R and R process. 

Hayley: So I was clearing The Turnaway Girls. My agent. Her name is Patricia Nelson. She requested pages and then requested the full manuscript. She got back to me and she said, I really loved the voice in this, like I love your writing and I love the concept of the idea. But there were some significant pacing and kind of plotting problems. I still struggle with plotting and painting. I am by no means an expert, but back then, especially, I was kind of still learning how to write, to write a book and to structure a book so well. First, she asked, like, would I be willing to do a revise and resubmit and I was like, Yes, of course I would love to do it. She sent me notes, and she sent me a bunch of books that she recommended. I read them. One of them was Save The Cat by Blake Snyder, which is a great story structure book if you struggle with story structure. 

So I read the books and I did the changes. Patricia is amazing and that she always gives notes that she kind of points out, points out what's not working, but she'll never tell me like you have to change it in this way. She kind of did that. She gave me broad structural feedback in terms of, you know, where the pacing was lagging and like how the structure of the story wasn't working. And I actually ended up changing quite a lot about the story, like about the world, too, because I find that when you're revising, oftentimes you change one thing and then you have to change another thing because it's all interlinked that it's all tied together and knotted together. 

So I had started during that revise and resubmit for her, and I was very happily doing it. I was really excited to get the notes because I've also heard that, you know, if agents do that - and this is absolutely true - if an agent offers you a revise and resubmit and send you notes and they're taking the time to to really look at your manuscript closely and send your feedback, that means that they really are interested in your book. So it really is, like, so close like you're almost there, but not quite. So I was happily working away on this revise and resubmit, and I ended up getting an offer from another agent on the original manuscript cause I had a couple of fulls out.

So I told Patricia that that had happened and she was like, Okay, just send me like, the first three chapters of what you've revised on. I did that and then she signed me based on those revised chapters. So I actually didn't finish the entire revise and we resubmit. Um, if that hadn't happened, obviously I would have finished it and then sent it to her and hopefully, you know, that sort of happened, Um, she sort of offered me representation. So, yeah, she's been my agent since 2015 and we actually work really collaboratively together to this day, and it was actually a really good thing, I think, that that happened because it gave me a sense of what it would be like to work with her. And I just knew that we clicked on an editorial level. But then I did another R and R later on when we went on sub and got an offer to revise and resubmit from my editor at Candlewick again, a very similar experience. 

My editor said she absolutely loved the book, Loved the voice, loved the world and there was some story problems. She wrote me a really in depth revising, resubmit edit letter. I think it was 12 pages long. It was actually really great because it gave me kind of an idea of what it would be like to work with her even before we work together. The reason why I did it also is because in the edit letter and in her email, it was really clear that she really understood the story and loved the heart of the story and just really wanted to help me to make it the best book that it could possibly be. I've had quite good experiences, with revising and resubmitting. 

I did another revise and resubmit, actually on the manuscript that I queried before The Turnaway Girls that actually ended up in a rejection. But that also kind of taught me that I think what happened with that, is that I kind of over revised the book. Um, I don't know if you've ever done that, but I kind of revised, like the book out of the book. And it was kind of like, unrecognizable by the time I sent it. But I do believe like, everything happens for a reason. I'm one of those people. So I'm glad that I had that experience because just every experience that you have like that, when you're querying is just like a nugget of gold because you're learning how to query, you’re learning how to interact with agents. You're learning how to structure a story, you're learning how to write the books that you were born to write. And I do think that first book that I queried that I was getting too a sense of who I was as a writer and kind of what I wanted to say and the kind of book that I wanted to write, that I wasn't quite there yet. So I think that's also probably why it wasn't, it didn't end up being a successful revise and resubmit, but it taught me so much. 

Mindy: That really is one of the most healthy and positive, and best ways to look at a revise and resubmit is that you just have professional feedback on your work, and that's something you got for Free too. That is something that is invaluable. And even if a revise and resubmit, because the other thing and it can be a frustrating element of the R and R, is that every editor has their own style. So if you revise and resubmit heavily like you were, you were just saying, If you revise and resubmit to really kind of fit a particular editor or you revise so deeply that it doesn't have a lot of resemblance to your original concept or your original voice, sometimes that can be highly frustrating.

I actually had an experience and I won't say which one of my books but it's one of my published books, where it was acquired, and I had gone through an editorial process and had already done a pass, and it was dense -  like this was not a simple book. And the editor I had been working with really wanted things to be a little more spoon fed. I did a version that was more of a walk through. They had a little more spoon feeding for my readers. Did that edit, turned it in, and in the meantime, this editor left publishing and I was handed to a different editor. She was a senior editor. She read it. She got back to me. You're really illustrating some things that I don't necessarily need, think, need to be. And I said, Well, that was because I did a revision based on notes from this other editor. And so the senior editor said, Why don't you send me your original manuscript that we bought? And so I did, and she's like, This is the one I'm working with. I like this one better, And I was like, Okay, so I had put in a revision in on a book and it was essentially scrapped. But that was okay, because I preferred the choices that the senior editor was making as well. It was an interesting experience. It was a little bit frustrating, but at the same time, I learned, you know, not to necessarily write to, Please an individual and a specific vision. Yeah, it's very hard to dissect what is yours and what is being imposed upon your work. 

Hayley: Exactly. I think especially starting out like when you're first querying or when you know, your first kind of starting out, with a finished manuscript, and you might have critique partners, but at that time, also, you if you don't have a sense, you didn't have, like, a very strong sense of who I was and my voice. And I think this is just actually a general problem. Not necessarily a writing problem, but but, you know, like having a real sense of conviction about your work is quite hard when you're just starting out and you kind of just You just desperately want an agent. You want to get published, you want this dream of yours to come true. And sometimes it feels like Okay, so it. I'll do anything, you know. If you want me to change everything about this book, I'll do it. 

I get what you're saying that like even though I always think of like a good answer, is really trying To, see your vision and then try to bring that vision into fruition in the best possible way in that situation where you have someone who's just trying to foster your project and get it to be the best version of itself at the same time, they're also individual people, and they have their own individual taste and they have different ways of solving problems or different ways of approaching the work. So, yeah, it is really It's a really hard line to walk with each project. You kind of have to know what is the heart of this book. What is the one thing that I would not be able to take out because if I took out that thing, it would die basically. And that's a really cool idea. 

But then at the same time, it's like, Well, how do I know what that thing is? And I guess sometimes you have to just try and have, like trial and error and see like Is the core feeling still alive, If I take this out? Because some stuff is kind of ornamental, almost. I don't know something that isn't necessarily part of the nuts and bolts of the story at the same time, style can sometimes be. And that's nuts and bolts thing you might say you might feel like, No, this is the voice of the book, and it needs to sound like this. It can't be in very clean, straightforward pros. It has to be like strange, pretty prose, and that's what the book is. 

Um, but yeah, it's hard to do that as a young writer, I found it hard. Even now. I mean, I am still quite a young writer. To be honest, my second book is coming out in a week, Um, and it feels super surreal. But yeah, definitely. Like five years ago, it was much harder for me to know, like what is me and what is them and what is like the crystallized center of the book and what is like the stuff that I can change and remove and because I've always liked to think of myself as like happy to be flexible. I also think that ideas are so stretchy and so capacious. If you have an idea for a book and it's not working, you can always find a way to make it work. Sometimes that means changing it quite substantially, But you can make it work. It's really hard.

Mindy: It is. It's very hard to do, and especially when you are a younger writer or you're unsure of yourself and what your own voice might be. Yet it is difficult. Uh, that's the fine line. That's the fine line. And I think you got to go with your gut. I had an interesting experience when I was querying my first book. It's a post apocalyptic survival set in a world with very little water, and I had two agents offering to represent me. I'd been querying for 10 years, dying for some attention, and suddenly I had two agents offering to represent me. One of them had only sold one book, and one of them had sold like 30 that month like it was ridiculous. But the highly highly successful agent was also more of a romance agent. She represented A lot more of like happily ever afters. 

And one of the things that we talked about on the phone-  my character's love interest dies in the book - spoiler warning, but he dies and that's because that's how I write and I write gritty and I write hard and I write rough and this is a harsh world and you're not going to get a happily ever after. And she didn't want that to happen. She wanted him to live. I talked to the agent that's only sold one book, and she's like, No, I love that you killed him. That was awesome. And I'm like, Well, you're going to be the better fit for me, like that's all there is to it. You know, sometimes you just have to ask yourself like you said, like, What's the thing that you're not going to trade in? And I was not going to trade in a happily ever after like that was not happening for me. Really, it is gut. I think whenever you have feedback from an agent or an editor, even a critique partner, you do need to consider it and ask yourself, Does this go against my prime core for this book? Do I feel very strongly about this and then ask yourself why, it's like, Do I feel strongly about this just because I can't accept criticism? Or do I feel strongly about this? Because it's the essence of the book?

Hayley: Or is it just my ego, Like am I just feeling a bit bruised hearing this criticism. You have that wish for someone would just be like this is amazing. And when they come back and say, Well, actually, this is great, but this isn't quite working for me or that isn't quite working. You do have to be quite self aware and emotionally mature, I think, to be like, Well, is it just me feeling a little bit like Bruised about this? Is it just my ego rearing its head? And what I find often helps is that if you just read it first and then kind of step away, give it some time and then come back because often the first time you read something, it is difficult to read criticism, but if you have a little bit of distance, if you go away for a couple hours and come back, or for a day or two and then come back. You can usually read it a second or third time with a bit more distance, and then maybe you can make more level headed choices about what to accept and what not to accept. 

And I also think that it's important. Maybe, and maybe part of the thing of growing as a writer is understanding what your weaknesses are and what your strengths are. So I'm very aware that, like I have certain strengths, but I also have weaknesses. And so if I get feedback about those weak points, I'm like pretty much always like my agent is right or my critique partners are right, because I yeah, there's just some things that come really naturally and then other things that you have to work really hard on. I've never met a writer who doesn't have at least one area that they feel like This is like my problem area, like, I just have to work so hard on getting this right. 

Mindy: It is hard to be circumspect about your own writing, but you're completely correct that time and distance is what helps make that possible. Real quick, why don't you tell us a little bit about your class 100 Ideas in how many days? 

Hayley: 10 days. I know it sounds a little outrageous. Um, it is actually a self paced tool, so you don't have to do it in 10 days. I just thought it sounded really cool to come up with 100 ideas in 10 days. It's about following your intuition and finding your voice and coming up with your most original ideas ever. And it's about how you can make a book idea, meaning not just a new story idea, but like a new idea for how to move the scene forward or an idea for a character or an idea for world building. You could make an idea pretty much out of anything. This is my belief in life and in writing. And I got to a point when I was studying law and suddenly didn't have time to write, didn't have time to read, and I was like, Oh, God, this is actually a really important thing to me. Like I can't actually live my life without this thing, without writing, And that was when I kind of admitted to myself like that I really wanted to write books, which meant I had to finish a book all the way from the beginning to the end, which meant that I had to somehow have a book idea. And so, even though I had, like, this intense desire to write a book, I didn't really have a sense of my own voice or what I wanted to say, and I didn't feel like I had any ideas. I didn't feel like my point of view was particularly interesting. 

At that time I was also reading mainly adult literary fiction, and that's what I thought I wanted to write. And so I wrote thousands and thousands of words, many manuscripts for adults. Before I started writing for Children, I was bored with myself. I had no idea what to write about, and I didn't know how to tap into that and how to like, think of something interesting to write about. So that's kind of why I created this course. 100 Ideas in 10 Days is basically four lectures and 10 lessons, so they're all audio. It's an online classroom. You can log in and do it all in one goal, or you could do it really slowly. You could do it over 10 months or 10 years, or however long, like however you want to pace it. There are reflections about idea, generation and idea development. So, just like general principles. And then there are 10 exercises, and each of the exercises helps you to generate 10 ideas. So by the end of it, you have 100 new story ideas. Even if you start out and you don't really have a vision for your writing by the end of it, you'll have a clear idea of what kind of a writer you wanna be. I just kind of wanted to make something out of love and put it out into the world. And, yeah, I hope that people get something out of it. 

Mindy: Let listeners know where they can find you online, where they can find your upcoming book and also how they can take that class. 

Hayley: So I'm at HayleyChewins.com. If you go to HayleyChewins.com/100-ideas, you'll find the 100 Ideas in 10 Days Course. And yeah, my book that's coming out in a week is called The Sisters of StrayGarden Place. It's out with Candlewick Press, 13th of October 2020. Kind of like a Gothic dark fantasy, middle grade about sisterhood and forgiveness and family secrets. Yeah, I really hope people like it. That's me. I'm also on Twitter at Hayley_Chewins.

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Matt Haig Talks Anxiety, Panic, Depression & Writing As Therapy

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Mindy: We're here with Matt Haig and we're talking about his new book, The Midnight Library. So why don't we just start off with you telling us a little bit about what it's about?

Matt: Well, the Midnight Library of the title is a library that exists between life and death. And, it's a very unusual library, it’s an infinite library, and the shelves in that library go on forever. Ah, woman, the central protagonist, Nora. She finds herself there. She has made an attempt on her own life, which is why she's between life and death, and she's drowning in regret. Within this library, she gets to try the other lives she could have lived with the help of the librarian within this library of books, this sort of godlike librarian, Mrs. Elm. She gets to be guided through different versions of how her life could have Been and to access those lives is as simple as taking a book off the shelf on opening the book. And then she's in those other versions of her own existence. So there's the Life where she carried on with her swimming career and became an Olympic swimmer. There's a life where she pursued music and became a rock star. There's the Life where she was good at science and is a glaciologist. There’s a life where she's a perfect wife, perfect mother, all of these different versions of how her life could have Been, which she's sort of been having wish fulfillment fantasies about in her real life. She now actually gets to see if the grass really is greener and works out how best to live her own life and whether her life is worth living. 

Mindy: You talk a lot about time in many of your books. It seems to be something that you think about a lot. 

Matt: It’s interesting, isn't it? Because I suppose when you've written a few books, sort of themes start to emerge. But they're not necessarily conscious themes. I suppose I do, I do always, um, think about time and mortality and all of that stuff. Um, but I sometimes wonder why we're all not doing that. I mean, I feel like, you know, we're here. It's so easy to get sort of lost in a sort of trivial sort of stresses or get lost in the Internet and get lost in politics or coronavirus or whatever it is, we lose sight, I think, of so much and so much of sort of existence, really. And we don't take into account enough of a sort of like the miracle of actually existing. 

We Look out at the world and we see some of this sort of hellscape sometimes and how horrendous it is. But essentially we are alive. We are on this planet. This is, there's only planet. The only planet we know of with life on it and we Get to witness that. We are like the universe witnessing itself, and we get so swamped by our sort of human concerns-  quite rightly. So there's a lot to get angry about. I'm not belittling any of that, but I think sometimes to look at the big picture to look at our place in time, look at our place in space. Um, yeah, I think novels are a perfect way to do that because obviously, you're telling a story. But within that story, you can have a lot of sort of philosophical asides and, uh, points about existence. And it's, you know, I I believe first and foremost a book should be entertaining. But I also think you can have your cake and eat it and put stuff in there, which makes people think and contemplate on, but can be part of the entertainment itself I suppose.

Mindy: Yes, absolutely. I agree as someone that has an English degree and has never really been able to use it in any useful way, moving through the world, trying to get a job or anything like that. Miss those discussions, I miss sitting in a classroom with people and saying, Well, you know, what is this book really about? What is the author saying or what is, you know, really having a discussion as opposed to Like I mean, I freely admit to like occasionally combing through reviews, looking for someone that maybe hopefully actually got it. 

Matt: Well, that's true, isn't it? Because people sort of say, You know, when you say what happens in a book? People are generally talking about plot, but I'm interested in what really happens. What is this book really about, what you know, because even... I don't know, even the most sort of potboiler thriller I think you know, is always about something. The author is kind of coming from a certain perspective or a certain place in time. You know, whether it's Agatha Christie or whatever. There's something going on you can't always mind read. You can’t always do a Jedi mind trick and work out what that author is precisely meaning by that, but I think it's a fun game, and it is a good form of communication or a way to interact with the book, too. Not just thinking in terms of plot and spoiler warnings. And you know, what you can say about plot? But what is that author actually, where are they coming from? Why does this story exist? Why they wanted to tell them. And I think that's an interesting way of reading and looking into it. 

Mindy: I agree completely. So I wanted to talk. You mentioned COVID. You mentioned the epidemic and all the things going on in the world right now, which it does seem to be like I'm in the US and, like, practically half of our country is on fire, and then what’s not literally on fire is metaphorically on fire. So you mentioned before your memoir, and a couple other books that you've written specifically, Notes On A Nervous Planet, I enjoyed very much in dealing with depression and anxiety. But if you could talk a little bit about being a creative, being a writer, specifically, in the current environment, how to handle or how you maybe handle or find ways to handle things like depression and anxiety as being a creative helpful in this arena. Do you use writing as therapy in a way, or is that a separate act for you? 

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Matt: It's interesting. Well, I mean, firstly I’ve got to massively checked my privilege here because I think being a writer and being a writer who earns enough money to just do writing who has a publisher wants to publish me. And All of that means that the transition in 2020 hasn't been that big for me compared to other people. So my life hasn't fundamentally changed. Obviously, the new situation, the global situation, situation in your country, the situation in my country isn't even great. We’re like handling everything the worst in Europe. Yeah, all of that stuff gets in, obviously, but I have to acknowledge that so many people have it worse. Even within this sort of arts and culture sector, I feel like books have been relatively - certainly the sphere I'm in has been relatively insulated, compared to say, if you're working in theater or something like that.

But, you know, I I feel anxiety for me, you know, Anxiety for me is one of the things that sort of continually dogged my health. And this year it has been full of anxiety, and what's been so strange has been realizing that ah, lot of the symptoms of  My anxiety and my breakdown when I was younger have been sort of almost enforced upon us. You know, like the compulsive washing of the hands, the distancing for social awkwardness that we've got on almost like compulsory agoraphobia. All of that stuff. And I feel like, you know, that's potentially so, triggering I mean, for my own mental health. Personally, it's not been great, but it hasn't been like a disaster. Had way worse times in the past. Actually, I've got a lot of writing done. And writing, and writing fiction has been, you know, such a therapy this year it's been so good to literally sort of take my mind somewhere else. And also, I think another therapeutic aspect of writing fiction is you, You're literally creating a world you can have control over. So in 2020 when all of us feel desperately out of control, I'm sure in the U. S. That's even more magnified. Um, it's so nice to have that world, you can have shape to your own will. 

Mindy: Absolutely true. I agree. 

Matt: Which makes me sound, which makes me sound like a megalomaniac, doesn't it bending the world to My will? Which I suppose. Yeah, that is basically what writers are doing.

Mindy: That is pretty much what we do. I decide what happens here. That's good. I agree with you. I also am fortunate enough to be able to write full time and so many of my friends and not just writers, but also, you know, just people out moving through the world, you know, lost their jobs there, had to stay home, and they would talk to me, and people would ask how was lock down going. And I'm like, you know, my life. Basically, didn’t change. I'm home every day. I'm alone.

Matt: I’ve been on lockdown since 1999. 

Mindy: That's kind of how I felt. I was like, Well, and it does make you question a little bit about how you're leading your personal life, but yeah, I mean, the world ended and it didn't really affect me. That's definitely leading an insulated life. But interestingly enough, some of my friends that are writers who, fortunately for them in their past, have never really had to deal with depression or anxiety, and suddenly they do. And the world has just become too much. And I have quite a few friends. They didn't have any coping mechanisms that they already honed for themselves, like throughout their lives. And I know quite a few people that just had almost mental breaks. There were like, I can't I can't do it, In some ways I was already like you said, You know, I was preconditioned for this. I'm doing fine. 

Matt: I think that's true. And actually, I was literally in an anxiety dip in December, January this year, pre COVID. And so I was recovering from that. Watching world news happening on my own anxiety, actually, sometimes in a strange way, is almost. It's almost better when I have something really to worry about something outside of my own brain. The worst type of anxiety for me is when I get into this sort of loop of self referential anxiety where you're anxious because of the anxiety or you're depressed because of the Depression, and then you can't get out of it. And sometimes, like when we used to live next to a river in York, in the north of England, And I remember nearly falling into a depression. Then the river flooded and the water came into our house and it destroyed our kitchen and it was a sort of everything. 

Everyone was suddenly so sympathetic towards me and saying, Oh this must be dreadful and it must be devastating and all of this. Actually, I felt better in a weird way for having that sort of like caveman brain kick in. And it's like I had a real situation to deal with. It certainly took me out of myself into an external reality. The trouble is, I suppose, this year our external reality has felt so beyond our immediate control that a sense of uncertainty adds to it and stuff. There's a great book, actually, When Things Fall Apart by an American Tibetan Buddhist Pema Chodron. I read that for the first time this year, and it is what's great about it. Even though I'm not Buddhist, is just a great book about uncertainty and about how we sort of frame, in the West, we frame uncertainty as this negative thing, but actually uncertainty is also the source of hope, and it's a source of good stuff and how we have to sort of accept despair and suffering as part of the same whole as joy and contentment and calm and all those things. And we've almost conditioned ourselves to believe that our life is a failure if it has any kind of suffering or pain within it. But this kind of Buddhist holistic approach, I think in 2020 has been very soothing for me. So, yeah, I have been getting a little bit spiritually. 

Mindy: That's wonderful. I will definitely check that out. That sounds like a good read for right now. Why don't you let listeners know where they can find The Midnight Library, which, It's going to be all over the place. It was recently picked for the Good Morning America, book club read for October. So congrats on that. 

Matt: It was published yesterday in hardback. I'm very lucky. Viking has given it gorgeous cover design and everything, and yeah, I mean, my My other regret about this year is that I'm not actually able to do a book tour in person, and I'm I'm stuck in in England doing Zoom, but it has meant I've been able to chat a lots of people and contact people, and I'm very active on Instagram on Twitter and all those things, so feel free to say hello there, too. 

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