A Conversation with Dwyer Murphy, author of An Honest Living

After leaving behind the comforts and the shackles of a prestigious law firm, a restless attorney makes ends meet in mid-2000s Brooklyn by picking up odd jobs from a colorful assortment of clients. When a mysterious woman named Anna Reddick turns up at his apartment with ten thousand dollars in cash and asks him to track down her missing husband Newton, an antiquarian bookseller who she believes has been pilfering rare true crime volumes from her collection, he trusts it will be a quick and easy case. But when the real Anna Reddick—a magnetic but unpredictable literary prodigy—lands on his doorstep with a few bones to pick, he finds himself out of his depth, drawn into a series of deceptions involving Joseph Conrad novels, unscrupulous booksellers, aspiring flâneurs, and seedy real estate developers.

Your novel is a love letter to New York City during the aughts of this century . . . from Williamsburg to the Village to the Upper West Side, the bridges, subways, and architecture that make up the city. NYC is a character in many ways. How did you develop such a clear love and respect for the city, and how did you communicate that on the page?

I’ve spent most of my adult life in New York. Even if I hadn’t, I probably would have felt that way about it from books and movies. We all have an idea of it as a character, right, for better or worse, hero or villain? I moved here while I was in law school. I knew some people with an open bedroom in a duplex near the Brooklyn Museum. The rent broke down to four hundred a month so long as we provided upkeep on a two-story organ built into the apartment. How can you beat a thing like that? It was a couple hundred blocks from campus and I got in the habit of jumping off the subway and wandering the streets when I should have been in class. In my mind, the city was mapped out as a series of bookstores, movie theaters, good food, and erratic subway connections.

As far as getting it onto the page, it wasn’t too hard to conceive, I’ve always loved flâneur novels. Get the characters walking, breathing air, talking to people, wearing out shoes. That melds perfectly with the tradition of private eye fiction, which this turned out to be, an accidental detective novel in the middle of a city full of arcane laws and a million people ignoring them in their own distinctive ways. That’s the town of my dreams—a city of well-read scofflaws.

Your semi-anonymous protagonist is an attorney. You were a lawyer before becoming editor-in-chief at CrimeReads. Why did you give up the law for writing and crime fiction?

Giving up the law always seemed to me the only decent thing to do with it. I practiced at a corporate firm in New York. I was a litigator. For a while it appeared to me a pretty genteel if inherently cruel profession and I always knew that I would quit it as soon as I could, before it worked its way too far under my skin. I did meet a lot of interesting people during that time. Strange clients with midnight crises, judges, prosecutors, opponents. A lot of gruff litigators schooled in the old New York lingo of chits and power brokering. It wasn’t a bad way to spend your formative years, but at some point you had to get the hell out. For me, books were the way out. I didn’t have any intention of writing about lawyers or the bizarre mysteries they sometimes get mixed up in, but when the time came that was the kind of story I wanted to read and to tell.

How has reading and reviewing hundreds of mysteries and thrillers as an editor at CrimeReads. informed you on writing a crime fiction novel?

It’s given me a deep appreciation for mystery fiction as a means of telling vivid, passionate, provocative stories of human striving and misunderstanding, a form passed down through the centuries, built around the dark art of suspense, entertainment and respect for your readers. The crime fiction world today is full of new voices telling timeless stories. I wanted to be a part of it.

An Honest Living is set in the early 2000s, at the tail end of the analog era and before Internet culture fully took over. Why did you want to write about this time period?

There was a mystery to everyday life during that time, some of which was snuffed out by the full onset of the digital era. I used to sit around bars and living rooms forever debating questions that could be answered by a google search. My pockets were lined with calling cards and I spent a good portion of every evening trying to get ahold of people I knew to find out where we were going or what time a movie was playing. Your roommates disappeared. Your bodega shuttered without explanation. The 2 train ran on the 4 line and it was up to you resolve all these little puzzles. That was the kind of mystery I wanted: full of odd, bewildering, lonely moments.

An Honest Living is a tip of the hat to noir mysteries and mentions “worlds colliding” 1950s films like Touch of Evil, Roman Holiday, Rear Window and, especially, from a later era, Chinatown. In what ways do the plot, atmosphere, and characters mirror Chinatown?

I can’t be the only one who thinks of Touch of Evil and Roman Holiday as a nice double feature, right? Or Rear Window as a guide to life? Chinatown was a movie I got obsessed with while my wife was first pregnant. I would fall asleep watching it, and in the morning we’d talk through various vindictive lawsuits the characters might have brought against one another. Lawyers get up to strange activities left to their own devices with a major life event looming on the horizon.

So, Chinatown worked its way into my life. I started seeing it everywhere, which I think is a little how Robert Towne might have felt when he was writing the thing, and certainly how Jake Gittes felt living through it. The fiction seeped into my New York existence and colored the way I saw friends and neighbors, new building developments and old bastards who mispronounced my name. I started writing a novel where Chinatown, the movie, has an outsize influence and Chinatown, the ambiguous unknown metaphor, prevails over ordinary logic.

What was your process for developing the noir feel the novel has? Did any crime fiction books from another era influence you? If so, which ones?

Ross Macdonald and the restrained, bighearted poetry of the Lew Archer novels were my touchstones. I was reading a lot of Margaret Millar at the time, too. Nobody writes a perplexing, insidious phone call like Margaret Millar. (She happened to be married to Ross Macdonald, aka Kenneth Millar, and imagining what that marriage might have been like no doubt influenced the direction of the ruthless literary relationships I was writing about, too.) God, I love classic noir. And from later eras, Donald Westlake, Lawrence Block, Elmore Leonard, with all those schemers and operators talking a mile a minute, mixed up in one another’s lives. Then returning again to Walter Mosley, Megan Abbott, Roberto Bolaño, Santiago Gamboa, Idra Novey, Laura van den Berg, all these writers capturing an uncanny, unmoored feeling at the heart of great noir.

Is there a second crime fiction novel in your future? If so, what can you tell us about it?

I’m at work on a sequel to An Honest Living . It’s another off-kilter murder mystery in the world of arts and letters, similarly obsessed with classic movies and noir atmospherics, but this time the characters go to Miami. It must be my homage to Elmore Leonard and another beloved lost city.

Erin LaRosa On Starting Projects... And Hopefully Finishing Them

I'm lucky (or cunning) enough to have lured yet another successful writer over to my blog for an SAT - Successful Author Talk. SAT authors have conquered the query, slain the synopsis and attained the pinnacle of published. How'd they do it? Let's ask 'em!

Today’s guest for the SAT is Erin La Rosa who has written many highly engaging... tweets, as a social media manager. But on her way to writing romance, she's also published two humorous non-fiction books, Womanskills and The Big Redhead Book. Her newest release For Butter or Worse comes out July 26!

Are you a Planner or Pantster?

I’m a planner by nature of being a Capricorn, eldest daughter, morning person, and all-around type-A gal (in my darkest hours, I probably relate a lot to Tracy Flick, played by Reese Witherspoon in Election). But I wasn’t always a planner—in fact, For Butter or Worse, which is my debut romance, started off as a pantster project. But as I soon learned by not having an outline I basically had to write a completely new book. So now I am squarely Team Planner.

How long does it typically take you to write a novel, start to finish?

I would say it takes me five to six months to write a book, from coming up with the idea, to outlining, to a draft. But I think a lot of my writing takes place in rewrites, and those notes from readers are oh so important for me.

Do you work on one project at a time, or are you a multi tasker?

I do multi-task! Right now, for example, I just turned in a draft of my book two to my editor and agent, but I’m also on deadline for a made-for-TV movie script that I sold with a writing partner. I try to handle these projects by giving them specific times of day—my book work happens the first half of the day, and I dedicate the second half to movies. 

Did you have to overcome any fears that first time you sat down to write?

I’ve been writing in some form or another since I was a little kid, so I’m not sure I was afraid when it came to writing. My fear comes in finishing a project—this is always hard for me to do. I can start a new project every day, no problem, but seeing it through to the end is when I start shaking and stress eating ice cream.

How many trunked books (if any) did you have before you were agented?

Oh my… I had to count and it took me a long time to dig up all of the books I’ve started and not finished, or simply just weren’t good enough. I would say I have four to five books that will never see the light of day.

Have you ever quit on an ms, and how did you know it was time?

I’ve absolutely quit manuscripts in the middle of writing them or changed direction on them. I feel like when I’m not having fun with the story—like, it feels like a slog—then I know something isn’t working. If I can’t rewrite my way to the fun, then it’s time to put it aside and maybe come back later.

Who is your agent and how did you get that "Yes!" out of them? 

I am so glad you asked this question, because I am OBSESSED with my agent—Jessica Errera at the Jane Rotrosen Agency. I had a month where I queried about twenty agents. Eighteen of those were blind submissions, and I was fortunate enough to have two people in my life who referred me to their agents. One of those was Jessica Errera, so I was able to at least be seen by her. But she wasn’t an immediate YES—she had a lot of notes on my book, and wanted to see me revise a few chapters to make sure I could meet what she needed to sell the book. So I felt like I had to win her over, but I made sure to view the whole process as me selling myself along with the book. Like, here’s the book but also here’s what I bring to the table as an ambitious, over-achiever. So I think that helped in the long run. I was fortunate enough to have three agents interested in me, but I knew I wanted to work with Jess after our first call and the amazing notes she had.

How many queries did you send? 

For my book, For Butter or Worse, I queried twenty agents. Out of those, I had three interested, and a few who sent nice rejections, and a handful who sent not nice rejections! Writing is so subjective, and you’ll never get a YES from everyone who reads your stuff.

Any advice to aspiring writers out there on conquering query hell?

The worst-case scenario is that someone says no. The world won’t end, it’s just one person saying no. But the best case scenario is a yes, and you’ll never know their answer unless you try and keep putting yourself out there.

How did that feel, the first time you saw your book for sale?

When I see For Butter or Worse as a book you can pre-order… I’m just floored. I went to visit my favorite romance bookstore, The Ripped Bodice, a few weeks ago, which is also where I’ll be doing a book launch, and it was surreal to know my book will be in that store, where I’ve walked so many times and bought so many books. I will probably cry when I see it there in person for the first time!

How much input do you have on cover art?

Truly not much! I sent examples of covers I loved, but ultimately cover art is not my area of expertise, and I trusted the team at Harlequin to choose an artist who would make my book pop. I was so fortunate that artist Natalie Shaw (@neobees) was my illustrator and we had the amazing art direction of Gigi Lau (@lau.gigi.lau).

What's something you learned from the process that surprised you?

I’m a romance author, so one of the really interesting things has been telling people I write romance, and they almost always have a funny reaction. Like, “Oh!!!” or “With sex scenes?!” I do enjoy making people a little uncomfortable, I have to admit!

How much of your own marketing do you?  Do you have a blog / site / Twitter? (I'll insert the links here)? 

I come from a marketing and social background—I wrote for BuzzFeed, and led social at Netflix and Amazon Prime Video—so I’ve definitely taken on a lot of the marketing and social in a proactive way. But I also have amazing teams at Harlequin and BookSparks (A PR firm I hired) who are helping to spread the words about the book. You can find me on Instagram TikTok. and Twitter !

When do you build your platform? After an agent? Or should you be working before?

I’m someone who deeply believes in the power of social, so I’m all for encouraging writers to be active in social and building out who they are, before selling a book. It’s not a huge deal for fiction, but in non-fiction it’s crucial!

Do you think social media helps build your readership?

One hundred percent, yes! I’ve had readers tell me they found me through a TikTok post and purchased my book because of that. BookTok is REAL, and everyone should try it out!

Erin La Rosa she lives in Los Angeles with her husband and three daughters (one human, two felines). Find her on Twitter and Instagram and on TikTok.